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    Trying to create a poem it probably ain't that good but well I at least wanted to try to make a poem.

    Wishes

    I wanted to do so many things
    But my heart coudn't take the stings
    Every time I tried something it stitched my heart
    You could rip it like a card

    Then I finaly found something to do
    But it also dissapeared out of the blue
    Now I am reatempting to call back this power
    But I am afraid I used the wrong seeds cause it's just like a rotten flower

    Yet I go on my determination won't halt
    Still I know it never was my fault
    I just gotta try harder they say
    But I had enough of that my wishes broke like clay

    So now all I can do is dry in the sun
    And watch what the end result will be

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    your poems awsome don't think bad of it and never let someones criticism stop you from writing you got some real talent!
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