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    I am lost and found
    Tangled and bound
    Can't escape from this forsaken place
    Tears fall slowly from my face

    I even forgot so how do I look ?
    My whole life is a empty chapter in a book
    Turning the pages
    Till page 600 I saw nothing then I saw cages

    I see chains and a man tangled to the ground
    But he won't be found
    Then I see him right in front of my eyes
    All inside him is rotted sadness hatred and lies

    He has a strange mark on his head
    He makes me feel sad
    He askes me ''Can you please free me"
    I got a problem you see

    I heard him out while he was talking
    He said his family died and there was one thing
    He had to do ''Kill the man with the strange mark on his head''
    Sudenly I felt it and got sad

    So he said can you free me ?
    I said no I can't I let you be
    And walked away
    He asked me too stay

    And said ''if you can't free me can I ask you something ?''
    I said sure say your thing
    He said ''Did you see the man with a strange mark on his head''
    I said no but his soul is probably dead

    Then there was a page torn and gone
    I wondered what text it would hold for so long

    So I thought and thought and finally realized

    That I finished the book
    And I cried a lot and then
    Sudenly I had a look
    Right in too the tears I saw a red mark it was not done with pen

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    How interesting, but the rhymes are good i guess, keep up the good work

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    Well, (it's been a while), i like the poem's feel when read aloud, i think it's a great piece and you've improved a lot since i last read your poems. keep it up.
    Thine soul is mine for the keeping
    As a thousand rivers now dividing
    Provides me with that much needed killing!

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    Weep as much as you want, and feel the hands of despair groping for your soul, for nothing can ease the pain of losing your beloved, like the gentle thrust of my sword.

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