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    I feel as if there’s an empty space there now…

    You know, where I used to hold you in my heart??

    I feel as if I need you, but I really don’t

    I just perceive it as that since you were there for me since the beginning…

    Well first day of school that is

    I feel as if I am empty, but what actually fills me up, is this:

    When I don’t have you on my mind…

    Isn’t it weird and ironic that I could want you so bad

    ONE MINUTE

    then turn around and say that not thinking about you keeps me happy??

    It’s not at all weird to me

    I can’t think about you cause you make me feel

    as if I had the greatest thing in the world

    and I gave it you up just because I would be disobeying my parents

    I would call that a deep story, and if you knew what went behind it you would too



    now is that classified as poetry?? o.O i don't know if it's just a short story or what but i just felt as if i should right it out, before i didn't feel that way anymore ^^' so whatever. If it's not poetry, feel free to delete it, i already have it written down. And if it is poetry ^_^ tell me what you think about it kay?? lol
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    I like it! ^_^ I'd post mine here too if not for the adverse effects of Copy-and-paste scams. And yes, at the least it's free-verse poetry.
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    thats a good poem, I like it... did you make it your self?

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    thanks for the compliments, ^_^ oh and yea i made it myself...I write poetry from time to time so...yea ^^'
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