Confusion

[Kalt96]

I have the feeling that I don't quite know everything about this poem, if you know what I mean...



I can see how love
dances in the edge of reality
not really going or staying
or chosing one side of both.

I feel the happines
like a game of lights
reflected on the vague smoke
of these few moments's fire.

Clarity is no longer
visible through the glass
of our doubtful acts
just like a cloudy night.

Is really sadness
flooding this old day
like a dense wet mist
does with the long hay fields?

Hope will bring the answers
like the dawn brings the sun
after a cold windy night
where you can't see things right.

[Sonata]

The beauty of poetry is that no one ever understands everything about it.

The fourth stanza threw me a little here - I didn't look ahead so I didn't realize the whole thing was a question. But otherwise this is really beautiful. I loved the phrases "love dances in the edge of reality" and especially "happiness like a game of lights". Very nice!

[DemonicRay]

don't really agree with sonata there.. but it is true the poem is confusing.. plus im so tired now... *sighs*

hmm... i think this poem is good.. it's a creative work..nice imagination u have there.. ^^