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    I have the feeling that I don't quite know everything about this poem, if you know what I mean...



    I can see how love
    dances in the edge of reality
    not really going or staying
    or chosing one side of both.

    I feel the happines
    like a game of lights
    reflected on the vague smoke
    of these few moments's fire.

    Clarity is no longer
    visible through the glass
    of our doubtful acts
    just like a cloudy night.

    Is really sadness
    flooding this old day
    like a dense wet mist
    does with the long hay fields?

    Hope will bring the answers
    like the dawn brings the sun
    after a cold windy night
    where you can't see things right.
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    The beauty of poetry is that no one ever understands everything about it.

    The fourth stanza threw me a little here - I didn't look ahead so I didn't realize the whole thing was a question. But otherwise this is really beautiful. I loved the phrases "love dances in the edge of reality" and especially "happiness like a game of lights". Very nice!
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    don't really agree with sonata there.. but it is true the poem is confusing.. plus im so tired now... *sighs*

    hmm... i think this poem is good.. it's a creative work..nice imagination u have there.. ^^

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