~Forgive~

[Jamie5192]

I lay here
Night after night
With my heart
Breaking inside

I want to talk to you
Tell you I’ll always love you
That I think about you all the time
That your always on my mind

As I write this now
I cry my heart out to you
All I want to say
Is that I can’t help falling head over heels

You’re the one I love
The one I dream of
Think of every night
As I hug my pillow tight

I remember so much about you
Your stuck on my mind
No matter what I do
I can’t forget how much I love you

Nothing will ever change it
It is eternal and everlasting
For all the pain you’ve put me though
I forgive you

[Kalt96]

Damit, I almost cry as I read it. It's really beautiful, I loved that way you put your true feelings into it. It seems like you were talking (writting) your heart out. I simply loved it. Keep on posting.

[Jamie5192]

Damit, I almost cry as I read it. It's really beautiful, I loved that way you put your true feelings into it. It seems like you were talking (writting) your heart out. I simply loved it. Keep on posting.

I was crying when i wrote this and thank you. It means a lot to me that you like it. I was writing my heart out and (in my opinion) is what makes a great poem.. when someone puts all of themselves in their work.. And i will.

Once again thank you *sniffles*

[DemonicRay]

wow jamie.. this is nicely written... it speaks of whats inside... nicely done there... ^^ keep up the good work ok~

[Trustworthy]

That’s so sad, I like it though. I felt so sad reading it. Good job Jamie.