~Ray Of Light~

[Jamie5192]

~Ray Of Light~

For every shinning star
There is a ray of light
Shinning down, giving people hope
As they dance throughout the night

For every ray of light
There is a shadow forming darkness
Building up while trying to fight
Until it finally breaks free

Shinning down on people
Giving them hope
Ss the world around them
Crumbles under pressure

As they dance throughout the night
They was away their sanity
and pull each other close
letting love surround their hearts

Hey.. if this sucks can you guys let me know and tell me where i went wrong?

[Trustworthy]

I like it. It gives me a nice feeling

[Kalt96]

Wow, I liked it very much. I loved your whole new idea of the light as a subject to writte about. I hope I can get caught by a ray of light one of these days ...

[DemonicRay]

ahh... jamie is still writing poems.. this is nice too ^^ like ur other previous ones.. good job ^^