just starting out

[zerocool]

Hi all this isnt my first drawing but Its the one Im working on atm I thot I'd upload for some comments I'm still finishing it (aka the head and skin shading) but give me some pointers for my next in the body and I'll upload the head when done


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[zerocool]

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here is some more please dont laugh too much

[IceBubleFlava]

Ur doing pretty good. Their pretty nice. Keep it up, you'll just get better everytime u draw. Like u said you've just started.

[thespiritoflight]

it's a good start.

i recommend you review this amazing "online book" and learn the techniques:

http://www.scribd.com/doc/47171/How-...nga-Characters

remember, learning the basic drawing techniques and understanding the 3d perspectives will help you a lot.

regards.

[Goodylucky]

very nice done! the 3rd one is the best.
for the 1st one, the shoulder should be down a little.
the 2nd one, the feet and the face kinda strange...
the 3rd one is okay. If you change it, I think it might look better.
(sorry about what I said...) um, keep it up, love to see more ^^

[MissChelly]

The one of the girl in the red bikini looks like it has the best proportions for a body. The other two:
The high kick one: the hand's a bit small and the foot that's kicking up looks a bit odd.
The HEADLESS! (sorry, couldn't help myself, teehee): the legs don't seem to show where the thigh ends and the knee begins. The hands are a bit small as well... though far better than the ones I draw!

Even so, with the two I gave critique to, they have their definite good sides as well:

The high kick one: I love seeing drawings of people not just in a regular standing pose. The action pose this particular picture has really caught my eye. I can see the movement.

The HEADLESS!: I like the outfit and boots. The clothing creases and the spot showing the bottom of the neck adds a nice extra touch of detail too!

All in all, I do like your work. Just keep practicing, because when anyone practices they can only get even better. Hopefully you'll post more for me to see also.

[naotavespaboy]

Your doing good for a starter. I can't give you any pointers that Chelle hasn't already given to you. Just keep practicing and you'll be a pro in no time! Good luck