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    *I don't know how to name this poem so it's up to you after reading it.*

    Why do I shed tears,
    For such an unworthy cause?
    Why do such feelings occupy me?
    Why am I filled with such flaws?

    I open up the lock of my heart,
    To see the pages of my memories.
    As I read and looked back I realized,
    At the present my life has turned into a sad series.

    Why do I not resent her?
    I donít feel a shred of anger or hatred.
    The pact and promise Iíve madeÖ
    Is it really that sacred?

    Why must I suffer needlessly?
    Why did I sacrifice my time and effort for you?
    Why do I care about you at the same rank as my family?
    No wait, I value you more and this is what I felt is true.

    Iíve realized I have to move on.
    I know this fact well in my head.
    May I still be friends with you?
    As I wait for your reply I lie on my bed.

    A great amount of time passed as I waited,
    Yet not a word or letter came.
    Is friendship a price of a broken relationship?
    If itís true, life is one sad game.
    "As the blood starts to boil, the flow of crimson splendor will act like a flood" ~R

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    even though there wasnt much rhyming in this, i still felt your feelings. i think you should call it "questions of the broken heart"..thats what popped in my mind as i finished reading. good work i really like it.

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