Cold

[Tetsanosuke]

Ice cold,
Beaten
Casted away
My eyes lost
My sight, frost
My senses numb
No warmth this sunny day

Defenseless against the storm
Heart from behind torn
Torn and asunder
My soul a powerful curl
Inside going down under

The icy blankets of my heart.
The blizzard crown atop my mind
The casted rays of light diverted
By mirrors of a gaze

Her gaze?
The gaze?
What gaze?

Cat eyes in the night,
The blind darkness deep
The snow builds up so very tight
Not sure how much longer I can keep
My sanity,
My sanctity
My sanctuary
My life

The moonlit edge
The powerful strife
The higher devotion
Slit by a knife
With a blade of pure copper
A pale tainted curve
The bricks that built up
My walls, all unsteady
fallen already
for sure

And so here it is
There and everywhere somehow
Not ever allowed admittance
Into the walls of her now,
And outside I lay
Cold,
Frozen bare on a midwinter day
With a sun not shining
Nothing I say
Or do
Isn't enough to finely undo...

Satisfaction unsought
Barely knew, inwrought
Sheer steepness by her heart,
The heart or the eyes
My pain, it was my surprise..
Guilt be her guise
Upon me left internally sodomized

Cold, like snow
Cold like ice
Cold like nothing will suffice

[*Lady_Kikyo*]

ummm.i dont know if it was the length that made me lose interest..but..i dont quiet follow the point to this poem..i dont want to bash..but i think i just need it to be explained to me..because i didnt grasp it.

[Tetsanosuke]

How would you feel if the one you loved seemed to ignore you, after going through a crap load of things with him/her? And it explains other things going on as well, and how cold it seems. I suppose a lot of it would only make sense to me, but you could interpret a bunch of it on your own with a little imagination.