shadow

**riyo himura** · 07-30-2007 05:27 AM

we were born on the same hour,
same minute,
same second,
we were twins

we did everything together
we shared everything together
we spent happy moments together
and we went through all the hard times together

my dark twin would never leave me
he imitates my every moves
and follows me from north to south
east to west

even after i've graduate
he still tails me
i start to feel the lack of privacy
and i start to feel annoyed

cant he just leave me alone?!
i try to get rid of him
with watever way
all i hope for is to lose him
to be away from him

one day i woke up and i couldnt see him
i actually felt happy
as time passes things became clear
i will never see him again
i will never hav him as companion again
for i'm already dead!

**Azel** · 07-30-2007 05:32 AM

Needs some work. If you could give it a bit of a deeper meaning, it could actually have a very creepy effect. Overall, one of the best poems I have seen on AF so far. Not so much because of the writing but more because of the concept.