The spacing for the two songs I submitted recently are bugging me...

[Kazuhiro Jou]

*Jushin Liger - Ikari no Juushin and Kiseki no Juushin: The spacing for the two songs I submitted recently has been bugging me....

For 'Ikari no Juushin', there's one change I'd like you to make:

"The miracle bioarmor is feeling pain from battle
There's nothing to fear until you vanquish the vile god"


to

"The miracle biarmor is
feeling pain from battle
There's nothing to fear
until you vanquish the vile god"

so it will be four lines instead of two lines since it looks better to me.

*:"RAIGAA SOODO" ten wo kirisaku seinaru tsurugi should be

*"RAIGAA SOODO" ten wo kirisaku seinaru tsurugi

(The colon shouldn't be there and I don't remember seeing it there when I pasted the text from Notepad onto the lyrics submission form.)


For 'Kiseki no Juushin', the spacing is really bothering me.

-Line 4 should be brought up just after Line 3.

moagare moagare ikari no honoo
mewosamase mewosamase yasei no kokoro
ebareshimono yo kami no koe wo kike



kiseki no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA

should be

moagare moagare ikari no honoo
mewosamase mewosamase yasei no kokoro
ebareshimono yo kami no koe wo kike
kiseki no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA


-Lines 5 through 8 should be brought up a space after
"kiseki no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA"



kiseki no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA




inazuma ga soro wo kakenukeru
kokoro de yajuu ga hoeteiru
harukanarutoki wo koete yomigaeru
ikari no honoo wo makiokose

to

kiseki no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA

inazuma ga soro wo kakenukeru
kokoro de yajuu ga hoeteiru
harukanarutoki wo koete yomigaeru
ikari no honoo wo makiokose


-Lines 11 through 13 need to be brought up a space after
"SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" sekai wo yurugasu tatakai

"SANDAA SOODO" imakono teni honoo no tsurugi
"SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" sekai wo yurugasu tatakai





POWER POWER RAIGAA
THUNDER THUNDER RAIGAA
ikari no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA


should be

"SANDAA SOODO" imakono teni honoo no tsurugi
"SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" sekai wo yurugasu tatakai

POWER POWER RAIGAA
THUNDER THUNDER RAIGAA
ikari no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA

And last, lines 22 through 24 need to be brought up a space after
"SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" inochi ga moetatsu tatakai


"SANDAA FENIKKUSU" ima ashita ni habataku tsubasa
"SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" inochi ga moetatsu tatakai


POWER POWER RAIGAA
THUNDER THUNDER RAIGAA
ikari no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA


to

"SANDAA FENIKKUSU" ima ashita ni habataku tsubasa
"SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" inochi ga moetatsu tatakai

POWER POWER RAIGAA
THUNDER THUNDER RAIGAA
ikari no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA


Thanks for making the changes if possible,
Doushokutoaoiro (Kazuhiro Jou)

[Kaitou Ace]

Fixed! thanks ^_^

[Kazuhiro Jou]

Brilliant! Thank you very much, Kaitou Ace.