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    Default The spacing for the two songs I submitted recently are bugging me...

    *Jushin Liger - Ikari no Juushin and Kiseki no Juushin: The spacing for the two songs I submitted recently has been bugging me....

    For 'Ikari no Juushin', there's one change I'd like you to make:

    "The miracle bioarmor is feeling pain from battle
    There's nothing to fear until you vanquish the vile god"


    to

    "The miracle biarmor is
    feeling pain from battle
    There's nothing to fear
    until you vanquish the vile god"

    so it will be four lines instead of two lines since it looks better to me.

    *:"RAIGAA SOODO" ten wo kirisaku seinaru tsurugi should be

    *"RAIGAA SOODO" ten wo kirisaku seinaru tsurugi

    (The colon shouldn't be there and I don't remember seeing it there when I pasted the text from Notepad onto the lyrics submission form.)


    For 'Kiseki no Juushin', the spacing is really bothering me.

    -Line 4 should be brought up just after Line 3.


    moagare moagare ikari no honoo
    mewosamase mewosamase yasei no kokoro
    ebareshimono yo kami no koe wo kike



    kiseki no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA

    should be

    moagare moagare ikari no honoo
    mewosamase mewosamase yasei no kokoro
    ebareshimono yo kami no koe wo kike
    kiseki no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA


    -Lines 5 through 8 should be brought up a space after

    "kiseki no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA"



    kiseki no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA




    inazuma ga soro wo kakenukeru
    kokoro de yajuu ga hoeteiru
    harukanarutoki wo koete yomigaeru
    ikari no honoo wo makiokose

    to

    kiseki no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA

    inazuma ga soro wo kakenukeru
    kokoro de yajuu ga hoeteiru
    harukanarutoki wo koete yomigaeru
    ikari no honoo wo makiokose


    -Lines 11 through 13 need to be brought up a space after
    "SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" sekai wo yurugasu tatakai

    "SANDAA SOODO" imakono teni honoo no tsurugi
    "SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" sekai wo yurugasu tatakai





    POWER POWER RAIGAA
    THUNDER THUNDER RAIGAA
    ikari no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA


    should be

    "SANDAA SOODO" imakono teni honoo no tsurugi
    "SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" sekai wo yurugasu tatakai

    POWER POWER RAIGAA
    THUNDER THUNDER RAIGAA
    ikari no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA

    And last, lines 22 through 24 need to be brought up a space after

    "SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" inochi ga moetatsu tatakai


    "SANDAA FENIKKUSU" ima ashita ni habataku tsubasa
    "SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" inochi ga moetatsu tatakai


    POWER POWER RAIGAA
    THUNDER THUNDER RAIGAA
    ikari no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA


    to

    "SANDAA FENIKKUSU" ima ashita ni habataku tsubasa
    "SANDAA FAINARU SURASSHU" inochi ga moetatsu tatakai

    POWER POWER RAIGAA
    THUNDER THUNDER RAIGAA
    ikari no juushin SANDAA RAIGAA


    Thanks for making the changes if possible,
    Doushokutoaoiro (Kazuhiro Jou)
    Last edited by Kazuhiro Jou; 07-10-2007 at 05:31 PM.

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    Fixed! thanks ^_^

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    Brilliant! Thank you very much, Kaitou Ace.
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