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Yeah these have potential. i'm not gona lie and get all starry eyed coz that won't help you get better.
Your shading is good and you seem to have a steady hand. On the last pic the human proportions are good and i can't wait to see some more of your pics, the newest ones. see ya
thank you kindomhearts tom i like people who are honest
and thanks bro I am glad you like them!!
here are some more recent ones!!
This is Mahiru from Crescent Moon which is a good manga...
This is Fai from Tsubasa and a random girl I created..lol
and this is my newest one and is from Tsubasa but I kinda messed up on Sakura's face but I hope you guys like them!!
Please comment on how I can improve!!
Makona: makona's not egg shapped, but other than that, it's good
Kirara: ears could be a lil bigger and the the head was a lil smushed-like
random pic: nice, It's really good for a fast sketch.
Mahiru: Head is a lil off, fingers are kinda like sausages( no offfence)
1. Fai's hair is blond, so in blk and white, it would be white, not black
2. The outfit was a lil carelessly drawn on him.
3. the Left hand(Fai's left) was a lil... eh. The fingers were too skinny and the wrist wasn't in sync w/ the arm
4. the feet are a lil too pointed
5. The feather was sketched in too much of a hurry
Tsubasa vl 3 cover: I suggest you use pen and outline the whole thing, it would look a lot better!! And fix Sakura's face, it almost gave me a heart attack. JK
Sorry I was gone so long! I had so much to do!
Hmm...Cant say bad cant say it's brillant (<--dont get madd!!) I just wanted to say it's good. Lol also you need some improvement on the 2nd, 3rd and 4th pic..^^ I personal like the last one it's really good~ Jelly Good~ Hehe anyways keep it up haiiiii?
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Mahiro: Since it's simply a very rough sketch, I'm not going to say much on it besides that the fact that the top half of her head is slanted.
Fai: Um, the only thing that I can say about this is that the shading isn't all that great. And the fullbody Fai his head is a little off, is all.
It appears black because, obviously, she tried drawing every strand of hair.Originally Posted by Hitsugaya389
Tsubasa: It's fine! You don't need to ink it in at all. The outline would stick out way too much if you did, especially since you used what I believe to be crayon or color pencil to color it in. And I like how you used black to shade instead of a darker shade of the color. Nice.
Yeah mostly what hitsugaya said. the bottom pic is by far the best but i see what he says with the face, if you fix that and outline it, it will be a class pic
Thank you Remie-chan! Yea some of these are older and arent that good but I am improving!! And I am trying to work on the face Kindomhearts tom so hopefully that will be fixed but i dont really think I should outline it, it just wouldnt look right but thanks!
Hehe, no prob. X3
awesome art i love your drawings and colorings !!!
they are very kawaii and good !!!
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