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    Default The Shooting Star

    his dark blue impignating iris's
    intensly match the ominious color,
    of the trailing summer's midnite sky


    he know's im gazing at him,
    and the blazing shooting star,
    above and going beyond our beating hearts


    is the earth winding around the quickest it can?
    is his car speeding up fast enough?
    for the shooting star is out running the world infront of us...


    is it our flaming passion?
    eagerly causing us to rapture the chase of life?


    we're impulsively wanting to rise,
    from these black wood chips and ashes,
    that the world sets under our burnt feet


    yet we are constantly falling from the sky,
    the star is foolishly falling


    can our misinterpreted mistake, give us hardship pain to learn wisely from for once?

    can we handle the hurting truth's scrapel burns upon our more-then-once lying rubber feet once more?

    can we accept the earth's well rounded relevance & karmatic pulls to the rest of the universe's reasonings around us?

    for how can this falling star survive,
    without a respective public atmosphere,
    of unconditional sympathic understanding?
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    The title is catchy.
    and evenrthough the poem doesn't rhyme that much,it has a deep meaning,eapecially for someone who can relate with it,
    Nice one!
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    good job! its nice
    everybody lies!!

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    thank you, i ussed to post poems in fan fic all the time...been really busy though :-/

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    nice poem lol wish i could write like like that

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    Hey not bad. ^_^




    Much love to Jagan Eye for the lovely set. <3

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    Not that bad...Great job.

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I wasn't the first one to post!!! -stabs herself-
    OOoo...Alannah...that was deep...no seriously it was.

    and evenrthough the poem doesn't rhyme that much,it has a deep meaning,eapecially for someone who can relate with it,


    A poem doesn't have to rhyme, infact rhyming is kinda for amatures >>>.>>>;;; -ish an amature- The way alannah expressed her self in the poem was wonderful hough dear it does need just a tad bit of editing -doesn't really know-. I enjoyed reading it, even if it's a little to smart for meh =/. Very nice job hon' hope you write more!!! pwease!!
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