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    Default Confusion

    Lying in your arms
    Wishing I was elsewhere
    Yet still wanting to be there.

    Love you
    Hate you
    Thoughts in between are so few.

    You're here with me
    Arms holding me tight
    But will this be our last night?

    As I lie alone
    I can't help but feel
    That none of this is real.

    Will this dream of mine fade
    Or simply wash away?


    ok, well it's not great [or even slightly good] so comment, anything's welcome.
    Last edited by OminousCloud; 08-11-2011 at 09:16 PM.
    "All You Have Are Your Bullets, And The Hope That When You're Out, I'll be Dead."
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    Looks are, and should be decieving, no?

    "Be Not Afraid Of Greatness: Some Are Born Great, Some Acheive Greatness, And Others Have Greatness Thrust Upon Them" -- Twelfth Night

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    Default Oh me oh my.

    I have to say, it's one of the prettiest poems i've ever read, way better then my own poems.
    Much much better..it's pretty!!!
    Once again, amazing props to the talented Paprika!!



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    It's nice. ^^




    Much love to Jagan Eye for the lovely set. <3

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    I TOLD YOU!!!!!!!!
    =D
    Once again, amazing props to the talented Paprika!!



    This smile kills....



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    Quote Originally Posted by smile1010 View Post
    I TOLD YOU!!!!!!!!

    =D

    [Lol] *Reps for Sifter*




    Much love to Jagan Eye for the lovely set. <3

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sobriquet View Post
    [Lol] *Reps for Sifter*

    ;.;..yay..but really beautiful peom, somebody second that for me hahahahahahahaaha
    Once again, amazing props to the talented Paprika!!



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    Quote Originally Posted by smile1010 View Post
    I TOLD YOU!!!!!!!!

    =D

    fine....it's not as bad as I said it was....but I still don't think it's beautiful, I don't see what you like about it.

    plus, it's my first shot at poetry so it's ok..
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sifter View Post
    fine....it's not as bad as I said it was....but I still don't think it's beautiful, I don't see what you like about it.

    plus, it's my first shot at poetry so it's ok..
    its' beautiful because it makes me think.
    and because i can relate to what it says.
    And because you made it
    Beautiful...
    Once again, amazing props to the talented Paprika!!



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    It's simple. I guess that's what makes it beautiful. xD




    Much love to Jagan Eye for the lovely set. <3

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sobriquet View Post
    It's simple. I guess that's what makes it beautiful. xD
    SOBRIQUET IS RIIIGHT!
    Beautiful.
    Once again, amazing props to the talented Paprika!!



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    wow that was simply astonishing poem
    great work keep it up

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    That was a very lovely poem. Truly sweet. Good job.

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    It was a very nice poem definitely so great ^^ it has a good feel to it too. Keep writing.

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Beautiful poem. Means so much, feels even more.
    Ell Oohh Elll /sarcasm

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    Default Re: Confusion

    Thanks to everyone who commented 3years after the original post.
    I find it quite amusing that something so old got pulled back up again.
    "All You Have Are Your Bullets, And The Hope That When You're Out, I'll be Dead."
    "People Die, Not Their Ideas. Their Ideas Are Always Remembered, Even When The People Die." -- V

    "Fair Is Foul And Foul Is Fair" -- Macbeth
    Looks are, and should be decieving, no?

    "Be Not Afraid Of Greatness: Some Are Born Great, Some Acheive Greatness, And Others Have Greatness Thrust Upon Them" -- Twelfth Night

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