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    Haunted

    Deep in the night,
    In which the full moon shines so bright,
    I lies in bed awake in deep hours,
    For in my dreams there is nothing but pain and spite.

    Fatigued by y restless nights,
    Visions of my past always appears in my dreams.
    What I thought was real was nothing but mere ideals.
    I live in a world where nothing is what it seems.

    What's wrong with me?
    I thought I was over it.
    The incedent that was like water under the bridge,
    But it was like a fuel waitnig to be lit.

    Why? Why does it keep comming back?
    Is it really a scar that will never heal?
    I try too be happy not to make her worry.
    Due to this, I always wear a mask to hide how I feel.

    Why? Why am I haunted with bitter memories?
    Why do these visions revolve around you?
    I chose to agree with you so why do I feel regret?
    Why can't I just face the facts that are true?

    I feel it... Regret is consuming me.
    Absorbing my being and turning me into someone else.
    A person whose mind is absorbed by the void of dark loneliness.
    The time of atonement comes as the ringing of the church bellls.
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    "As the blood starts to boil, the flow of crimson splendor will act like a flood" ~R

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    Beautiful poem, befitting the title. Good poem!
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    Nicely done. A few gramatical errors, but still very good. =D
    Horror is as Horror comes, look it in the eye, you run away. I am Horror and Horror is me. Run, Run away from me.

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    Thanks and sorry if it's rough around the edges. I just made that poem from raw emotion so I wasn't able to refine it a little. Again sorry. ^^;
    "As the blood starts to boil, the flow of crimson splendor will act like a flood" ~R

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