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    Default Missing Angel

    Missing Angel

    Winter melts at your gentle touch
    As warm as the sun above the sky
    I see a new beauty bloom slowly
    All around me
    Just like in my memory
    For I have always loved spring
    You are always with me
    You are like a rose
    That blooms every spring
    So precious in so many ways
    Your goodness lightens my world
    Your innocent smile, gentle words
    Lifts the heavy burden in my heart
    I will always love
    And cherish every single moment with you..
    Althought you are still missing
    Like a lost child into a unknown world
    The only thing I have is...
    A precious memories
    Of the darkness and the good times
    You are just like spring
    That sleeps peacefully in my heart
    You are an angel that may be missing
    But you will never be forgotten
    Because spring comes again
    That's when heaven would lead you home
    Once again.
    Hope the angels look down at you
    Through the day, through the night
    Wherever you are, my dear..
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    Rebecca Medford-Edwards
    25 August 1992 - 23 November 2007
    Lesley-Jo Smith
    3rd March 1989 - 17th February 2008

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    Thats Very Cool, I like it

    Did you wright that????

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    Beautiful as always, Lenebug. <3 Keep writing... I love your stuff.

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    I see...very interesting.

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    OMG I love it! x3 I love you more though <33
    Alone

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    Before I even read it, I already found a problem.

    It's a big block of words! Please seperate into stanza's or something...

    2 minutes later.....

    Now that I've read it, I found a few small grammatical mistakes. My main problem with the poem, however, is not the quality. It's the content. Seen this kind of thing hundreds of times over, and it's not getting any better.

    That said, this is a well written poem.
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    Wow that is a great poem. i'm amazed. i could never come up with something like that.
    Embrace your dreams, Whatever happens, Protect your soldier honor

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    I luff it!


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    lovely,
    lenelicious, I don't mind Poetry as long as it comes from you <333333333

    Last edited by GalNAc; 06-09-2007 at 04:28 AM.

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    wow.. thats good.
    I could be the missing angel of anyone.. ahaha.. kidding.

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    Great poem Lene! <3 Love it. Yeah, few mistakes, but still awesome! -huggamafies.-
    Horror is as Horror comes, look it in the eye, you run away. I am Horror and Horror is me. Run, Run away from me.

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    very interesting....i like it very much...just a few mistakes, but you can fix those.....other than that i loved it!

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