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    Okay, to start off, I like what I did with the body, I was going for a clothing style I'm not accustomed do and think I pulled it off well enough. My lines are NEVER EVER CLEAN unless I get to the inking phase, which I haven't in the things I will post today. Maybe in the future, but not today. I like sketchiness, and so it shall stay. Also, her left hand has a padded glove on, and so it is bigger. I should have stretched the sleeve out a but to reflect this, but eh, what can I do now?

    Now, onto the criticism. WHAT THE HELL DID I DO WITH THE NECK! The rest of her body is more or less angled properly until we get above the shoulders. Why is that? I dunno, I drew this a couple of months ago and my best guess is I didn't intend to do an overhead view and so neglected to fix the collar when I decided to do it.at least with the face I can claim she's looking up, but even her face seems a little flat to me.

    Eh, that's criticism number one. Next!
    Last edited by Sanosuke23; 05-14-2007 at 10:20 AM.
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