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    Wink See the truth

    Deep in the depths of life
    None are allowed to realize
    None are able to see
    The sadness which lay beneath

    Shining light so pure and true
    The absolution of the crude
    Expulsion of the purest hate
    The happiness of such a fate

    To see what is unseen
    The hidden pains unforgiving
    Crushing pains which people hold
    The cruelty of such deathly cold

    To have that sight be a curse or
    somekind of blessing but what's it for?
    Allowing me to see the pains of others
    The pains of mine I show no more
    POWER TO THE CHIBI!!!


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    "See the truth", I like the feeling to that poem. I truly do. Can I ask what you were thinking when you wrote it?
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    See the Truth is a good poem. I liked it, It had a nice flow. A wide vocabulary in my opinion dosent hurt either. It could have been a bit longer in my opinion though. Good job and keep up the good work.
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    -Just tell me baby, Tell me I'm crazy, You know it's what makes your heart scream "Take me"..-Mithrosent



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    Wow. Really good.













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