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    Junior Member macygrey224 is infamous around these parts macygrey224 is infamous around these parts macygrey224 is infamous around these parts macygrey224 is infamous around these parts macygrey224 is infamous around these parts macygrey224 is infamous around these parts macygrey224 is infamous around these parts macygrey224's Avatar
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    In your dreams,magical thoughts...All things are real unless you dream they're not.In your dreams,love is the plot carried on wings of hope.Each of our souls intertwine, when we do.Instantly we see it the time to grow and be it when everything is pinned on a hope.Let rise the dreams of your heart,that innocent youth careless and kind.Free to roam the breeze in love only when two brilliantly shine as one...
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    This poem seems deep, But not its title, and you could have put the poem going downward, line by line, But other than that, I like this poem, keep up the good work.
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    Your poem is not in stanzas?
    It's okay,but you know i think it's more of a maxim,than a poem.And maxim's are better,it can last for eternity.

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    i like it ... it would make a nice song

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