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    The rain
    I hate the rain
    It makes me feel uncomfortable
    It makes me feel pain
    It makes me remember my past
    It makes me forget the present
    It makes me blur my future
    Each drop
    Reminds me of what I have forgotten
    Of what I longed for before

    The rain
    It makes me feel pain
    It makes me hate
    Rain
    I hate the rain
    It is the cause of my misfortune
    It made my life miserable
    That is why
    That is my reason
    For
    Hating the rain
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    How in heck can rain can make you misforutnate?!?! Wow. Other than that it was good. it had a rhythm and flowed well. Good Job.
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    Quote Originally Posted by [unlimited] View Post
    * Agrees with genivive *


    well, thats what i feel about the rain.. i just dont like it... kinda like a character in a game i played a couple of weeks ago... we're the same... we both don't like the rain.

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    I like the rain theme. You kept the beat and it seems as if you put your full opinion into the poem. Great job. ^^
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    You seemed more capable of saying "I hate the rain" than actually making the poem interesting. Try branching out when writing a poem. I only noticed "rain" "hate" "pain". That doesn't make for good reading.

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    This one is good, But also confusing with what Genivive said, Rain can actually cause misfortune and hurt people, but physically, This poem has sadness and anger...nice.

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    I love the poem,especially it's figurative meaning.But,you know i love the rain,eventhough it makes me rememberbad things like my mistakes.

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    To be honest your poem bores me, all you do is repeat the same thing again and again. You have no literature skill in your poem at all.
    This is a Sig. It's horribly out of date.

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    sorry!
    Last edited by dream magician; 03-26-2007 at 03:44 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dream magician View Post
    I thought you wouldn't be harsh anymore.you are hurting somebody again.
    nah it's okay... there are people who give that kind of criticism.. it's those kinds of criticism that makes the person being criticised(spelling?) strive to create a more beautiful poem..

    I'm really kind of used to those kinds of comments on my poems by my friends. It doesn't really hurt me or anything because i look at it positively rather than curse those people.. I just have to accept the fact that there are people who don't like what I write..

    anyway, thanks dream magician for caring about what I feel about the comment..
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    Very nice poem. Not happy, but nice! You know what? It makes me think of Zangetsu from Bleach.

    Quote Originally Posted by Zangetsu
    Ichigo... I hate the rain. Rain falls in this world, too. When your heart is in chaos, this sky become clouded. When you are sad, rain falls so terribly easy. Can you understand... the horror of being pelted by rain in this solitary world? If only to stop that rain, I shall lend you any strength.
    Fitting, right?

    Edit; Oh yeah, and I just remembered a quote from another forum.

    "ARGH Soft Rain... It's ripping my flesh of at slow and gentle speeds..." hehe
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    I really like this poem because I tend to reflect when it rains.

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