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    Default only a daydream

    *i am inspired to write more peoms...*
    *tell me if they suck or not... okay??*

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    the world seemed to stand still
    as your eyes stare back into mine

    a kiss was the only thing missing

    "a daydream"

    i woke up and felt flustered

    "only a daydream"

    my time with you has stopped

    "just a daydream"

    i want to exchange reality and my daydream

    i want to see you again

    "in my daydream"

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    "I LOVE BellZ!!!!"
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    “This fairytale is supposed to end with you dying and me crying…
    …but the fairytale ended the other way around…
    …with me dying and you crying.”



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    Another nice poem from Danie-chan and I love day dreams(until someone wakes you up).

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    thanks!!!! and i feel the same way about daydreams!!! especially if it's about someone you really like!!!!

    the bad thing about daydreaming is getting caught by someone, the worst of them is a teacher!!!*guilty*

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    I like it. I can tell you're getting a lot better. I can't wait to see more from you. ^^

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    I dont like your poem.

    (I have nothing against you. Im just being honest)

    I wish you good luck in making a better poem.
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    i like that poem it was really beuatiful i love daydreams to i have them all the time especially in skool which is a bad thing for me and my grades

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    Well, it was pretty good. It wasn't about depression and anger. For once. ^.^ But i did like it. It had a rythmn and feel to it. Kind of like a dreamy feeling which went well with this poem. Great job. You are getting better.
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    Quote Originally Posted by LavenderMist View Post
    I dont like your poem.

    (I have nothing against you. Im just being honest)

    I wish you good luck in making a better poem.
    well... i knew that someone won't like it... anyway, thank you for being honest with what you think!!! i'll try to make a poem that you would like..

    thanks for all the people who think that is was great!!!!

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    …but the fairytale ended the other way around…
    …with me dying and you crying.”


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    I like your poem a lot danie-chan, and I am sure they will get better and better each time you make another one. I too love to writing poetry, and I have a few that I have made in my spare time too. Poetry is a great way to display your feelings, and you seem really happy in this one. That is awesome! To tell you the truth, I like daydreaming too sometimes. However, if work needs being done, I will attend to that first.

    Ha ha, well anyways keep up the great work danie-chan, you are doing great!

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