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    Default another death poem

    Sometimes I wonder,
    Why be afraid of death?
    Each day that passes you
    by in life brings you a step loser
    to death.
    Death might be standing right
    next to you, waiting for the right
    moment to let you know it's there.
    One day it will be right at your
    front door,
    So don't be surprised when
    you get that knock.
    A Hero Of War


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    I think it's a nice poem. ^.^ But, I couldn't really feel it. I think you should put more heart and soul into your poetry. And maybe make it rhyme a little here and there. Anyways, keep up the good work. =)

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