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    Hope you like it. If you wanna coment do so.

    That dream that died
    It once shined so bright
    I lost its sight
    I feeld an bite

    I cant widstand this pain
    Its making me insnane
    The depresion inside
    My soul died

    I got this heart
    That keeps me living but I drew the wrong card
    That dream is fading right before my eyes
    All those lies

    All the pain and strugling
    I don't get a thing
    To what will I strive
    To what sort of goal wil I dedicate my life

    Is it to die
    Or to retrieve my soul and don't have to say good bye

    All I know is I wanna be happy

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    well i think its pretty good.. good job

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    Quote Originally Posted by TrainHeartnet View Post
    Hope you like it. If you wanna coment do so.

    That dream that died
    It once shined so bright
    I lost its sight
    I feeld an bite

    I cant widstand this pain
    Its making me insnane
    The depresion inside
    My soul died

    I got this heart
    That keeps me living but I drew the wrong card
    That dream is fading right before my eyes
    All those lies

    All the pain and strugling
    I don't get a thing
    To what will I strive
    To what sort of goal wil I dedicate my life

    Is it to die
    Or to retrieve my soul and don't have to say good bye

    All I know is I wanna be happy
    i like it its cool by the way im a girl

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    " i feeld an bite " that makes no sence. Maybe you should put in, " It lost it's light"
    " My soul died " you could change that to " I can no longer hide" I like that cuz it has 2 meanings 1- you can't hide yourself. 2- you can't hide the depression.

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    Default Dream

    I like it so much,you really know how to say your feelings.Are you dreaming of becoming an writer?cause you are really fitted to be a writer.Do you also make stories?cause if you do,i so wanna read them.By the your poem is so nice,but sometimes the words lack,but it's cool........

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    Hmm im no writer just an 14 old year kid. Trying to poem. Maybe I once make a story if I do and if its finished I wil let it know. And PM it to those who want it. But the problems I never know where to start. And thanks for the Tips ishakak.

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