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    Default The Blue Curtain

    A blue curtain unfolded upon my window
    A Silver shadow creeped in its darks
    It moved like the mist of a blossoming morning
    The silver shadow reflected the golden stars
    Upon the blue curtain at my window
    Night
    The sweet shuddering smell it brings
    The crisp air breathed by the green leaves
    The air breathed in by the silver shadow
    The grass swayed in the breeze
    The dandelions fluttered in the sky
    Night
    The night in which I slept-
    And dreamed of the silver shadow
    I locked eyes with a beautiful silver mist
    I woke up amused with my longing
    I knew the silver shadow was watching over me
    Night
    The moonlight held my gaze-
    As it stalked the silver shadow
    I wished it would come
    It would lock me in its misty eyes
    As the dream was in my sleep
    Night
    Lost in thought I felt
    Soft cool hands down my neck
    Then brushing gently along my neckline
    Then comes the kiss that stopped my heart
    There goes the silver shadow into the night

    Night
    The blue curtain unfolding upon my window
    Where creeped the sliver shadow
    Moving like the mist of a blossoming morning
    The silver shadow reflected the golden stars
    Upon the blue curtain at my shadow
    Night
    *lost in the world of broken and dead hearts,
    traped in the mist of ones who lied,
    confused by how foolish i am ,
    wanting to disappear in my world alone with ones who care for me,
    is that forbidden to ask that-tell me someone*





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    Nice job Sis! ^^

    I see that this poem is quite like a dream, somewhat giving me a sense of shown longing and maybe a hidden desire to find something.

    I enjoyed the pure mysteriousness of this work, it brought me to think: "What is this Silver Shadow?"

    Though as the truth be told, not all poems rhyme.

    So I say yay, Sis! ^^


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    Nice job!
    You'really are Tetsanosukes sis?
    No strange you write so good...

    originally posted by Tetsanosuke
    I see that this poem is quite like a dream, somewhat giving me a sense of shown longing and maybe a hidden desire to find something.
    I agree with him,I mean...I don't really know what to say,but know this - it's awesome,keep up the good work!!!
    I'm looking forward to read some more of your poems!
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