i drew something

[*ms.azrah*]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a1...g?t=1168077028

i hope you like it.

comments please! i need good critics.

[Kiss of Death]

ok, i will post comment, but... dont double post the same drawing

it is nice... faces are wery realistic... i like guys (i think it is guy) eye. makes him cute, but... theres one thing that i dont like. it's girl wings... i donk know. they looks wrong... you trien to draw angel? angels wings are like birds. you need to draw them longer... sharper... well, i hope other time you will draw it like it supose to be. good luck

[ore wA Tenshi]

I disagree, Kiss of Death. Angels having feather wings is just a stereotype... There's nothing wrong in using our imagination to create different things...
Anyways, *ms.azrah*, the pic looks pretty cute. But still I think you got to work out the detailing on the clothes like aplying some folds on it and stuff.
Keep up!

Peace~

[Kiss of Death]

i think that angels have big, strong and sharp wings. but you right. clouces can be more decorated. still, guy looks soooooooooo cute!

[keoko]

haha your pictures pretty good keep it up and youll be on top of things!

[Capernicus]

Hey, yeah, it looks really nice. ^_^ I think you could have added more detail to the clothing (folds, texture, etc). However, the faces and hair are just marvellous. <3 The sword is pretty too. Did you use another pic for reference?

[Silver_Kiss]

That is so cute!!!

I disagree Kiss_of_Death,
I think she wanted that look, I think it looks more Chibi-like, which makes it cuter. I don't think she was aiming for detail.

[sasunarubishoujo]

it is really cute ^ ^
it just needs some folds here and there and where the wing meets the back it needs to be a bit bigger in my opinion.

[Kiss of Death]

ok. just to let you all know, i sed what i thot. what ever who gave me bad reps should be chame of themselfs, coyule i just commented. i think wings could be longer and sharper. if you think other way, that's fine. people, cant you respect other minds?

[ore wA Tenshi]

kiss_of_death... There's no shame to feel just because we disagreed with your opinion. We didn't tell you to think diferently. We just pointed out our opinion and by chance mentioned we didn't agree with yours.
I do think your's a bit too limited.But if you think they should look BIG than that's ok by me.
Also you're the one with the problem here... I noticed you're commenting everyone who disagrees with you...You're the one who's having a bad reaction towards us, so get a grip on yourself.
Now kiss_of_death, one final request, don't rep to what I just said. It would be totally unnecessary and would spam this thread even even than it is...

*ms.azrah* I repeat that it looks very cute so keep up and I'll be waiting for more.

Peace~

[Omid]

Yeah I concur with that opinion, it's how she wanted the drawing look like. Nothing wrong with it, it looks pretty good actually. Who cares if it's not perfect, it's the artist's work that we should honor most.

[Kiss of Death]

listen people, i just said that in my opition wings should be longer and sharper. artist will deside she wanna shange it or no. if it should look like that, that's ok with me, couse drawing is very good

[The Blue Baron]

i cant really tell you much that needs to be changed because its really good looking, keep it up i cant wait for more

[mE.]

Cute, I like it.
I always wanted to draw pictures like that.
One thing though a few (more) folds would be good.
As for the wings they are ok.

[*~Lily_Gemini~*]

i loved it, it was so pretty. keep up the good work! you do tho need to work on the textures of your clothing and things like how the others have said...other then that i think its great! and btw: the wings look fine!