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    Default The path of Sorrow

    A tragic story carved on a gravestone
    Is yet a story left untold and unknown
    Untreated scars sore with the pain of sorrow
    A cry that will remain unheard today as well as tomorrow

    Death's silent voice whispers it's way inside my ear
    And I weep without shedding a single tear
    In my field of silence I stand alone
    And to the world I speak in a death-like tone

    I speak the words society fails to understand
    And through the thorns I've walked without a helping hand
    Beneath the barren ground lies the death of beauty
    Locked away into the loneliness of obscurity.

    The portrait of life has lost it's color
    And to the arms of death, I run like a child to it's mother
    Life itself is the deadliest of all sins
    A harmful truth yet revealed on the surface of one's skin

    The path I walk is forever unkown all I know is that I am alone.

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    thats it i cant take it sad poem after sad poem i am now going to kill the next person who puts one up.
    Ok your sad get over it.
    your poem is boreing same as every poem thats been up for the past 2 months.
    wow it makes me want to kill you and your whole family.
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    Whoa! I couldn't compose a better poem myself! That was truley an amazing poem Midnight_Rain! I loved the way you used descriptive text, and it flowed nicely with the title, and the lines combined. Great Job! Keep up the great work!

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    Thank you I am not really sad I made that one a very long time ago for an anime char for a contest so that's the only reason it's up

    Thank you Tets! Your the best big Bro a sister could ask for!

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