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    Default I Don't Mind if I Die

    The trees are singing across the night
    And the flames of fire seeking light
    Crash through the window into my sight
    To char me down to the ground with a cry
    But I would not mind it if I died


    So now Iím floating in the sky
    Waiting to return to the ground and sigh
    And think what it is like to be
    To have the world agree
    And whether I will survive the crashing comets fall
    And as you listen to the call
    You will find your ashes spread across the sky
    But do not mind it if you die


    Theirs a clock inside my chest
    Which is ticking off Ďtil final rest
    Will bring back around the game
    Flowing through another name
    Taking all I had the same
    It all that I was before save for
    Now Iím a girl this time
    And my mother yells with tubas and balloons
    Her tongue to soft for speaking as she swoons
    And than the petal falls from the rose so high
    But I do not mind it if I die


    And as the waves receeds
    And starts to bleed
    Itself across the shore of my design
    I will scream to see
    The world set free
    With two mouths for singing in the grime
    As it encrusts on me
    My motherís skin
    Now I am somebody I donít know
    But look at the sheets
    Where I was born
    The little dancing childrenís feet
    Are now broken up and torn
    By the road I tread
    With someoneís head
    And I will wait here till I can sigh
    Away my life and die!
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    wow...great job on that poem...


    thax for the sigs and advatars -Ookami- and kiss
    of death!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    You like to cover all veiws, dont you? Its a very good poem. Easy to understand with a nice flowing of literature and rhyming. Way to go. ^_^ *bows*

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    Wow great job!!! I also sometime feel the same.
    "As the blood starts to boil, the flow of crimson splendor will act like a flood" ~R

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