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    *Note: I made this because of my emotions sooooo..... I don't exactly know what to name the poem. It's up to you what you wanna name it.*

    Scorned, lashed, and punished,
    Did I commit any crime?
    Is it that horrible of an act?
    That it could only be forgiven after a long time?

    Did I commit a sin against you,
    Causing you to hate me?
    If I caused you to cry or I made you sad,
    Fine… So let it be.

    You closed up to me,
    Leaving me insecure.
    I offer my help but you shove it away,
    Through this, I can tell that your feelings are unsure.

    You Used to trust me,
    But the words “Leave me alone!!!” Came from your mouth.
    These words pains me so much,
    That tears would flow and causing me to shout out.

    Why are you closing yourself to me?
    You won’t lose so much compared to what you’d gain.
    If I only bring sadness to you then I guess I have no choice.
    I’ll take my life if I’m the source of your pain.

    Oh Almighty God… Please smite me now.
    So I may not pain to the person I hold most dear.
    Take me away from this rotting world,
    I await your judgment and stand without fear.



    "As the blood starts to boil, the flow of crimson splendor will act like a flood" ~R

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    wow BlazingSoul...that was an emotional and great poem...hmmmmmm...maybe u could call it "Pain"?


    thax for the sigs and advatars -Ookami- and kiss
    of death!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    wowness i love this poem 2!!!! *claps*
    Our greatest glory is not never falling, but rising every time we fall....

    (Signature by Nespa) Thanx Nespa!!!

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    woow great poem =D great questions trough
    keep it up i hope to read more soon =D

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