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    Default Lack Of Closure

    [This is a pretty short piece, i happened to write this when someone I used to trust, show me her true colors. I know the rythem for this piece ends quite fast but thats why the title fits because its not over.]


    Lack Of Closure



    I died a thousand times over
    As thousands of daggers lept from your tongue
    How could we have come from nothing
    To finally look back and say it was something
    And you just end it here
    With a knife in your hand
    And my blood on your shirt
    Stabbed just so timely with each of your verses
    Perfectly matching your treachery

    God damn how I wish that had killed me
    To never endure something that wont end to quickly
    You lied, you cheated, and begged for forgiveness
    I cried and I seeded each verse that you spoke
    Hoping maybe one day I had awoke
    From a childish nightmare where you lose all your friends
    But I didn't that's not how this ends

    It continues your reign
    Your double edge sword
    Your hunger for pain
    And you left me here
    With this sewn in my veins
    Your face in my memories
    Your voice still remains
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    Wow, you make me feel as though I betrayed you. I'm sorry you had to go through that pain.
    I am too connected to you
    To slip away, fade away.
    Days away I still feel you
    Touching me, changing me,


    Considerately killing me.

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