Happy Holidays

[Fetal Fetish]

Yay! My first happy poem on the forums! xD The holidays are not far off, so I decided to post something for the occasion. I hope you like it. Criticize away..

When the holidays come up,
We all get happy.
But some just say,
"It's all too sappy."

Some just sit in front of the tv all day.
But others get excited for the holidays.

Christmas, New Year,
Everyone has a great time.
Happy, happy holidays,
that's the meaning of this rhyme.

We get out of school,
We get off form work.
We go and find happiness,
wherever it may lurk.

So be happy tomorrow,
and happy today,
so you'll be in the mood
For the holiday.



Hope it wasn't too..preppy-ish. It isn't my best work (again, happy poem), but I hope you enjoyed it all the same.

[Demon Hunter Dante]

Hey i think it is great!! It is pretty good for a happy poem...i dont write many myself...but still it is really good