Your shadow

[Luzifer]

I watched your shadow shave itself onto a marble floor

The rose that it was clutching fell and landed in my core

And I just stood there staring at it as it went for the door

With a ring of light around it, it was threatening to poor

Out itself upon me, standing there so numb

As I watched your shuddering shadow play across my eyes

And a bush was made of razor leaves and some baby’s dreams

And I watched the budding fruits float with dew too sweet to seem

And the light that glistened off of them was piercing like a scream

But I just in silence stood there and watched them through a screen

Of confusion of which to take and did not take a one

As I watched the berries fall to earth and there they rot and die

And there is a fork to choose and I am standing there

I have been for sometime now, I have not moved a hair

Still deliberating and weighing which one has the better air

And which to walk down which to see and if I even care

So standing there so silent with your shadow on my face
I will watch your shivering shade move on and past my mind

[Flay]

I don't know, the flow staggered quite a bit in this poem, and some of the visuals you were using just didn't have that spark. I can see where you were trying to go with this poem I think, and with some revamping this could be a nice poem. I'm not saying it sucks, just needs work, IMO.
Peace be with you.