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    Its about searching a savior i almost have one somone to talk with. And somoen that makes you feel beter.. So i almost have a savior lol. But when wil it come ? =( I made this for the people looking for a savior.





    Save me please.

    Save me please.
    Help me I need it.
    My sadness needs to cease.
    Cant smile for a bit.

    Please im searching salvation.
    I wanna get rid of the pain.
    My sadness became a iritation.
    Its driving me insane.

    Wanting to touch a knive.
    But stil I wait for my savior.
    Stil I wanna keep mine live.
    I cant buy one in a store.

    Oh please come fast.
    Save me from this insanity.
    I dont know how long i last.
    Please show me the happy side please make me see.

    Wake me up.
    And if i go insane.
    Hit me with a club.
    But for now i walk al alone in the rain.

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    O_O interesting and good rhyming

    very good ^^ i know quite a few people who can't write poetry as well as you. very good ^^ *aplaudes*
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    I love poetry. you did a good job not obcessing about rhyming, cuz that is not what poetry is. Poetry is simply an strong way to express emotions, and it appears you did that very well. Though it is fun to rhyme sometimes-
    here is a poem that i wrote that rhyms, but does not at all express my outlook on life-
    (so it is not really a good poem)
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    In the dry, forsaken lands,
    of dunes of gold and dusty sands,
    there on prowel the warrior stands.

    And in the dust and dirt he lay,
    with claws of death to kill his prey,
    to him, this but meer child play.


    And with a deadly, murdorous skill,
    like lightning he dives upon his kill,
    compleating one more leathal drill.
    ^.^ Neko Kira ^.^

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    (for water wolf) Thanks i apreciate the aplaud. =p



    (for neko) And thanks and i know wat you mean that ryming is fun. ^^

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