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    My desire.
    I want someting.
    Right now mine feelings are fused in one thin wire.
    Wat I want is not a golden ring.
    Desire

    I want it so bad.
    I would even kil for it.
    But thats to sad.
    Its like selling youre sould to the devil that dosent fit.

    I wil get it I just have to wait.
    I have to hang on for a wile.
    Thats wat I sayd.
    But when I looked back there were dead bodys evrywere a whole pile.

    Wat did I do ?
    Did I lost my mind ?
    Im no more a human mine eyes are no longer blue.
    Now im blind.

    All I can see is one big flame.
    I became a undead.
    Its al mine fault I cant give anyone the blame.
    I wanna cry this is so sad.

    But undead dont feel a thing.
    The wire is gone its cut down.
    I scream like I sing.
    Mine eyes growd brown

    My hearth is tearing apart.
    The sin im walking with.
    Stil im not feeling a thing in mine hearth.
    I cant sit.

    I cant die.
    I cant do wat i desire.
    I wanna be gone and fly.
    All is gone gone is my wire.
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    Stay in my memories. Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova has a reputation beyond repute Furubalova's Avatar
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    gosh you write stuff i would write lol >< besides the spelling errors i liked it

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    Sory for that im bad in english i try to edit them. First i need to know or they worth it. =p

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    i'll edit them if you want me to (i have nothing else to do lol) all poetry is worth keeping! some i keep because they reflect who i am, others because i can see how i need to change my style. you can always learn from your poetry, even if it is crappy.

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    I think the words are nice done just the gramar is crappy Xd. The meaning is the guy is just screwed. =p

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    I dont get it why cant you die? just take a sharp razor blade and.. okay ill stop. Very good poem though.
    ^.^ Neko Kira ^.^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Neko Kira
    I dont get it why cant you die? just take a sharp razor blade and.. okay ill stop. Very good poem though.
    Read again. In the middle somewere he sayd he lost his human form. Hes a undead now and as you know the undead dont die. Muahahaha hes just cursed.

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