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    Author's Note: Rest assured, dear friends, that this was whipped up in a matter of minutes, with no prior thought. That's why it's kind if ill written and has no point. >3





    Inclining her head toward the wind,

    She sensed the passing of her kin.

    And in her heart she drew her sorrow,

    And left it brooding ‘till the morrow.



    Inclining her heart toward the flame,

    She drew up in her heart the blame.

    She drew up in her heart her sin,

    And cursed the curse that killed her kin.



    She knew then what was to be done.

    Before the setting of the sun,

    She drew five points there on the ground,

    And then a circle there around.



    She shouted boldly all the words

    That’d brought the demons by the herds.

    She begged the monsters, “Bring them back!”

    They laughed, and vanished with a crack.



    She dropped thereafter to the floor,

    And tried the awful spell once more.

    But, alas, to no avail,

    There rang again a mocking wail.



    “If they won’t take me…” she sighed,

    Her silence, then, had much implied

    That with her father’s trusty knife,

    She then herself could end her life.


    Some day, you'll dine on a solid snake.


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    Wow! The rhythm really kept it going... dangnabbit... this is SOOOO good!!! You should continue whipping up poems like this.... there are several images clearly made... and a few fiery moods that are easily understood. You seem like you've had experience in poetry... keep it up! I won't stop bugging you untill you post more!
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    This is a cool poem!!! You need to be a poet (If you're not already are x_x) but yeah, It's a good poem!!!


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