Embers of a Son

[Angel Andrews]

Embers of a Son

By

James E. Andrews II


There was a time when I had faith,

When I believed that you where great,

You where all wise,

Stronger than every one,

A Titan,

I am older now, I know better.

You are not all wise,

Stronger than every one,

You are not a Titan.

You play with women’s feelings,

You break their harts,

You say you will be there for ever,

You say you will marry them,

I had faith that you grew up.

But no.

Before I knew it,

You made me in to the omega,

Made me in to your servant,

I did not see this till I was older,

By then it was too late,

I became a passive,

I would not fight you,

I would do as you said,

But,

What you don’t know, are the slow burning embers

Than live with in me.

The embers of a revolt,

Then the fires of hate,

Will blossom from the embers of the revolt,

that will be your undoing



By now I think, no

I KNOW I am a better man then you are,

Father.

[Alias-Revolution]

Very interesting.

Remember folks -- it doesn't have to rhyme to be a poem.

Pure masterpiece Jimmy.

[Astalle]

Very Good poem. Keep up the good work ^_^

[Moonlight Eve]

Masterpiece doesn't even come close to discribing this poem. This poem is much, much more than that. Pure..absolute...beauty. It's priceless.

Wonderfully done James! Would like to hear more from you.

[Skyla_G]

WOW!! O.O This is an incredibly heavy poem. Such a sorrowful past... but taking a step ahead and taking control and becoming... 'older' is always vital and refreshing. Keep writing pieces from the inside.
~Skyla