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    Embers of a Son

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    James E. Andrews II


    There was a time when I had faith,

    When I believed that you where great,

    You where all wise,

    Stronger than every one,

    A Titan,

    I am older now, I know better.

    You are not all wise,

    Stronger than every one,

    You are not a Titan.

    You play with women’s feelings,

    You break their harts,

    You say you will be there for ever,

    You say you will marry them,

    I had faith that you grew up.

    But no.

    Before I knew it,

    You made me in to the omega,

    Made me in to your servant,

    I did not see this till I was older,

    By then it was too late,

    I became a passive,

    I would not fight you,

    I would do as you said,

    But,

    What you don’t know, are the slow burning embers

    Than live with in me.

    The embers of a revolt,

    Then the fires of hate,

    Will blossom from the embers of the revolt,

    that will be your undoing



    By now I think, no

    I KNOW I am a better man then you are,

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    Very interesting.

    Remember folks -- it doesn't have to rhyme to be a poem.

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    Very Good poem. Keep up the good work ^_^

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    Masterpiece doesn't even come close to discribing this poem. This poem is much, much more than that. Pure..absolute...beauty. It's priceless.

    Wonderfully done James! Would like to hear more from you.
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    WOW!! O.O This is an incredibly heavy poem. Such a sorrowful past... but taking a step ahead and taking control and becoming... 'older' is always vital and refreshing. Keep writing pieces from the inside.
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