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    Default I, myself, and me

    Have you ever laid in bed,
    and wondered who could've laid next to you,
    who Could be holding you,
    comforting you,
    loving you,
    you could have been wed,

    for a moment you see them lying next to you,
    when you crack a smile and your vision turns blurry and blue,
    but when you wipe away the tears they gone again, away from you,

    so your left alone,
    there is no one holding you,
    no one comforting you,
    no one loving you,
    only hating you,
    and there is no way to atone,

    Now you lay in your bed,
    wishing you were dead.

    Note: Another true event.... go ahead and call me a hopeless romantic... but I still believe the greatest victory feels empty with no one to share it with.
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    wow i'm first!!! XD !!! *waves at everybody* haha! suckers! lol!
    *staightens her posture and gets to the subject* yes i feel the same way if you are awarded or achive notice, it isn't really all that special if you have no one to tell. it has ilushioned happniess, then is very sad. VERY VERY good. *aplaudes*
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    it pretty good i can tell you put alot of work in it. keep doing a great job
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    An interesting poem. I like it, you should keep writing you're pretty good at it.




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    I'm sorry to say this, but it was quite dull. If I were you I'd work on it abit more, and the title had nothing, absiloutly nothing to do with the entire thing. Usually a poem has usage of the title in it. On a scale 1 through 10. I must say a Two... Keep it up, maybe you'll get better. Practice makes perfect.
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    I know its not my best work... It wasn't really a poem to begin with it was more of me telling a short story through rhyme.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Demonic Ice Dragon
    I'm sorry to say this, but it was quite dull. If I were you I'd work on it abit more, and the title had nothing, absiloutly nothing to do with the entire thing. Usually a poem has usage of the title in it. On a scale 1 through 10. I must say a Two... Keep it up, maybe you'll get better. Practice makes perfect.
    I'll have to agree with DID on this one...it's not your best work, but it's not your worst. Try harder and keep it up! ^.^'
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    I agree with DID... Sorry -_-;
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