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    Default Short little ditty.

    But oh, how they dance!
    Flitter and prance,
    Twirl and whirl in ethereal trance.
    Round they go, amongst the graves,
    Round they go, the rythmn's slaves.
    But oh, how they dance!

    (Written to Consensual Worlds, by Delerium. Just in case anyone was interested.)


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    It's sort of catchy, like it would be lyrics to a song. Amusing to read, but I think that it could have been made a little longer. I enjoyed reading it, none the less.
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    It wasn't necessarily meant to be much longer than that. =/ Thanks, anyway.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Fiery
    It wasn't necessarily meant to be much longer than that. =/ Thanks, anyway.
    Meh, I just thought that it was just a little too short.
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    thats kinda deep.....



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    Aha! Then I shall write a longer one. --Type, type.-- I'm feeling an ever-lasting bout of insomnia sweeping over my household. =/


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    I agree with all of you! it's deep short and I quote Ichiro ''It's kinda confusing''

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    I think it's nice to have a variation in size when it comes to literature!^-^

    I agree with Ihiro Matsuchani, it has a catch to it, of course there's a splendid rhythm here aswell. Methinks that's what makes it catchy? Anywho, great job and cute imagery! Keep it up!
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