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    Oh and the woman is crying
    As she sings for escape
    The conflict is scrying
    Its words on the sky moonlite cape!

    And the ocean is rolling
    Between you like two diverse polls
    The round bell is tolling
    Back to your corners you souls
    And rest up for the next bout
    For you donít know what this is about

    And that words that are flying
    Like daggers and die
    And the judge who is sighing
    Goes down to sleep and to lie

    And the river is winding
    Through the field rimmed with tears
    And the gears they are grinding
    Never to move for the years
    Most beautiful you pass in squall
    Never to stand up and be tall

    Your eyes they are flaring
    As you scream fetus like tongue
    Out of your head which is blaring
    Out of your voice and your lung

    And your mind it is closing
    And shuts out all time and all reals
    And it seems the mouse is posing
    As an elephants while mortar guns peals
    Rock the ground and take away your escape
    Back the way you came, your mistake

    The books they are burning
    As you are making your case
    And the hornet is turning
    Back into the whole human race

    The shotguns are blazing
    They sing with the voice of a saint
    But the houses theyíre razing
    Are all covered up with dead paint
    Falling into this metaphor parade
    Where they sleep where they are paid

    Your voice it is fadiní
    Your throat burns like whisky despise
    Now look at the maiden
    in a ring of cold steel she cries!

    And the moon it is crashing
    What happened before I gained sense
    The whip that was lashing
    Is saying it was induced by incense
    Always it begs to be free from its mind

    Always it begs to be judge one more time
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    Whoa this is so heavy and heart-tearing... Im kinda surprised nobody else has posted >.<but I can vouch for this poem.... and it's kind of sad to imagine that so many ppl go through this stuff... some arent so extreme and others are beyond comparative.

    There are so many great points in this... its hard to favor any specific verse... but I kinda like the rhythm of the ending. Though it's so hard to say you actually 'enjoy' this... in a manor od speaking... though it's a very thorough and other parts are so deep that you can tell the writer gave this piece alot of thought. Please don't give up writing, and post more... your style is very rare and enjoyable.
    ~Skyla-chan xoxoxo

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