amber eyes

[vixen_wolf]

through amber eyes
i see your heart
through amber eyes
we are apart
i gaze at yours
you gaze at mine
i wonder who is the crazy or the sane
both plagued by darkness
both know of pain
standing alone
the fear of life
etched in stone
through amber eyes
i see your feature
not as human but as creature
known by all
understood by none
forever knowing
you're the one
who can kill
has every right but no free will
has no voice but can holler shrill
heal the healthy pain the ill
through amber eyes
our souls colllide
always falling but with a glide
nothing left in the middle of inside
the ones that love have gone away
or turn and shot the dove
the ones that feel always wear a glove
they all want life push and shove
to the end of the line
to start over again
they know everything yet
nothing but to kill and sin
through amber eyes
we are apart
one at spirit
one at heart
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o.k. tell me what you think

[Number_the_Stars]

Awww I liked it your poem wolfie ^_^.. there's real good imagery I especially liked this lines- "the ones that feel always wear a glove" and- "the fear of life/ etched in stone/ through amber eyes" good job!

[LittleMomo]

Wolf! It's me Fox! ^o^ I love this poem so much, can't stand reading it over and over again. ^ ^ Keep it up.

[the_last_icarian]

I love the rhythm and the repitition, has a nice misty atmosphere to it. Keep it up! ^^ (Reps for the poet! )

[Heartless Soul Eater]

i love this poem keep writing

[~Mithrosent~]

its great! i cant stop reading it! omg it amzing! who r u talking about tho...

[vixen_wolf]

its sorta about a wolf you know becasue they have amber eyes ^.^