Life is how it began, painful

[Heartless Soul Eater]

Life is how it began, painful
Death is how its always been, relieving
Love is how you want, eternal
Money is how you use it, stupidly

Resting in Life, is anything but true
Chaotic and Crazy leaving a fight
Solely thinking about what next to do
To ruin your life, painful is its sight

Being in Death, is how I want to be
It just waits till I placed myself so high
So from the height it heartlessly drops me
As I still fall, I see the bright blue sky

Waiting in Love, is all you end up with
Only to see what’s missing in your life
At the moment you see how the love lifts
But in the end, you just wish for a wife

Wanting in Money, is the most foolish
It always raises you so high then drops
Into the sea with all the other fish
There is no chance, of you reaching the top
It like 5 small poems of wisdom, well maybe not wisdom but I still want to know what you think

give me good reps please (I did ask nicely)

[Furubalova]

yeah i use my money not-so-wisely lol
good poem

[Doriimu]

This poem is great. ^^ It's always good when a poem gets me reflecting. Very well written.

["lotus alchemist"]

what a nice poem..,xD looking for "love"? I'm just 10000k!xD lol! j/k
oh well! keep up the good work.., comments makes your work some improvement^^
try to have other's opinion,xD hehe! I'm not good in making poems but fond of reading,xD

[iMud]

Great poem especially the pain in it.

[DarkMoonPrince]

Wow, this poem is good, I like it. ^-^

[Heartless Soul Eater]

thanks ppl it cool to know what u think

[~Mithrosent~]

i love it. it has deep feeling and in my opinion it flows nicely. keep up the great, no awsome work!!!

[Twilight Angel Kohaex]

I think this poem fits you most, i really like this one. Keep up the great work alright?

[.Gogo]

Wow I really like your poem! Makes me consider my own money management now... Lol anywho, keep up the great work! xo

[Skyla_G]

Wow, O.O I'm in love with the first verse <333
I want to give you reps but I cant, when i click it brings me to the top of the page>.<
please keep posting, ill make sure to rep you at another computer, man! sorry!
~Skyla-chan xoxoxox

[Grave Robber]

i think dis tis petty good