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    *Mmm...! I'm still on a darkling streak...But I haven't written a majority of "happy poems" in my time as a member of this forum. LOL. This little creation is another one of my half-alive half-in-reality inklings of the mind. Have you ever had a day where you feel you're not "all there" or simply..."Slightly Hollow"? Well...This poem is for you.*

    *Dedicated to the world's slowly vanishing souls...I see you...Come back through the looking glass...Shadows don't suit you.*

    Oct 3, 2006 at 11:52 pm

    Slightly Hollow

    Broken heart where can you be?
    Shattered and scattered which blind eyes cannot see.
    Chained hands reach without avail...
    Bloodless and loveless contained in skin so pale.

    Half a mind and a mind so rotten...
    Twisted and torn, I am but forgotten.
    Silence this deadman's voice in its throat.
    Tears to a river become a corpse afloat.

    Slighty hollow, not here nor there...
    Simply amissed by society's vicous stare...
    Tear this life asunder for I will not care...
    Because living so tornly is more than I can bear...

    *Dreams are Precious...Don't let them fade away*
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    Wonderful Poem. I think a lot of people have had a "Slightly Hollow" day before. Keep writing.. I hope to see more, dark or happy.

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    Last edited by otakuyume; 10-04-2006 at 11:28 AM.

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    Otaku.
    You know you write beautiful poems, yes?
    I think you stalk me, a'cause this poem seems so much like me on most days.
    -Lick. Stalk. Love.- <3
    Eye el yew, gurlfrenduh. xD
    Keep up the good work, lovely. =D

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    If defending my art and my self is bad. Then I guess I'm a bad person.
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    Wow... this gives me... flourishing inspiration >.< You're so talented Otaku-oni-chan!

    The first paragraph... how do I describe this... it's like 'beyond dejavu'... make any sense? Duuuuude. I'm shaking with ummm excitement.... ya know like when you're watching a suspenseful movie? I'd love you to read my newest poem and give me constructive critisism and insight. But I can't open threads... my computer is messed up that way... >.<

    ~Skyla-chan xoxo [thank you for posting]

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