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    There is a girl painting silent portraits of all that I own
    She smiles down beside me and gives me back my loan
    I wonder quiet if she sees the insides I hide from her eyes
    And her hair is made of silver made of soulís typhoon
    While around her sings an angel chorus all are out of tune
    But she does not hear them she just grins soft and cries
    So where, just whereíd she come from? And where will she go?
    Is she made of my skin and flesh bits? Tell me I donít know
    She seems so very familiar seems like she was here
    Way back when there was another but that one did fade
    Down, down into the sand dunes where are souls were made
    And all that remains of her is a vial of tears
    All the waterís coursing through, are all running white
    Some are begging me run home some are begging for the night
    When one and one are one but I can not let that pass
    Because I have to much water and too much too few of math
    As all these words that gouge my insides crash into her bath
    And she takes them in her arms and like children, she treats them as
    Her own like those which were mine, and she begins to clean
    Them until they are no longer mine for mine could never gleam
    Like those which she has taken, taken just to save
    Now she is sitting on a high rope, looking down at me
    I wonder if Iím really seeing just what it is I see
    But she vanishes and I begin to feel older than the waves

    Now the sky is crying and no one knows why
    It looks like somebodyís face is water colored Ďcross the sky
    It tones the make me stand still looking into me
    I wonder if it sees me wonder why shrieks
    In peels of sorrows lightning wet as the ground they seek
    And I turn back to the road which goes into the sea
    And as I stride cold into the waters they begin to pull
    Me down to the into the deep where there is a bull
    Once made of shiny metal now covered up in rust
    And as I float along the seafloor with seaweeds sad and shrill
    Screaming sadly waving in the current as the krill
    Are floating like a nimbus and settle down like dust
    Singing sad discarded sonnets which they can not say
    Of things that have crushed them and made them be this way
    But see away they go tossed around and gone
    I keep on sinking as the darkness of the water carries me on down
    Falling to the bottom where thereís a plastic crown
    And here a sperm whaleís crying and tears carry him along
    So I fall down to the seafloor and stare blankly into the black
    I donít think I can find my way or if Iím going back
    And I feel those specters come up saying ďNothing left to saveĒ
    And though I know I do not see them I look to where they are
    And see nothing save a knife and a broken car
    And suddenly it hits me that I am older than the waves

    Now the volcano explosive opens up and spews black flame
    Which flows up from the insides of all someone tried to name
    And with glowing onyx spews red smoke into the air
    And you can see the gorillas pound fists against the sun
    Which has fallen low after it was scornful shunned
    Back down into ground, and now it is drowning there
    And a man and another are suddenly disfigured and scream
    Soliloquies at each other as they are hoping itís a dream
    But there engines are now broken deep within their heads
    And so now I go running from the fires go running to a place
    Where an earthquake is a-rumbling and is gone without a trace
    Only to be back tomorrow and back again to be fed
    With tongues and tossed of daggers that are made of someoneís bones
    But I donít see them as they go by I hide out here alone
    Breaking out the windows with monochromatic eyes
    And so Iím destroying nothing and breaking all I see
    But what else should I be doing? As screaming silently
    Is a deranged demoted soldier coming from the sea
    His blazing shoulders not extinguished but hotter then before
    All the chilled fluids could not quench that core
    Where motherís milk and red letters could not hope to save
    And so he joins the other warriors and they all run around
    With shatter sever stanzas as they tear the court house down
    And all, it slowly downs on me that I am older than the waves

    Then the allegro staccato plucking came out of the haze
    Where the sound of chattering teeth marked the passage of the days
    and when the world has quelled it shaking shall we feel it breath
    in pace with the singing birds which right now donít dare to fly
    too scare they are of failure too afraid that they will die
    and so they stay up in the perches in the cuticle wreath
    and the moon I see it waver way up in the night
    where it is so scared that it is the only light
    for the stars donít dare to venture way up there alone
    and I see walking people looking down into the earth
    what if they should look up? What if they find fear not mirth?
    What then will happen? Dear god will they turn to bone?
    Nobody can tell you and nobody can know
    Save that they know everything but they wonít go
    Because they canít tell if they are certain for they might be wrong
    And the picture on the sidewalk is looking like a man
    Who doesnít move at all and is stuck there in the land
    Standing there so silent that world just moves along
    And leaves him left to his inactions while I just scream out loud
    Where is the direction where is the nearest cloud
    Where I can find my self and walk into that cave
    Where I shall find a diamond that glows inside my fear
    But I donít know I sit down content to count my tears
    And suddenly my eyes open and Iím older than the waves

    So look at the valley standing grandiose and tall
    Parading above the mountains screaming ďI can see it allĒ
    Its tread I see in foot prints fading in the snow
    Like small disembodied ghost feet that are looking for a soul
    In which to find true power to make themselves whole
    But they are attached to something who doesnít feel that low
    So with dentures in its mouth the lion bellows out with glee
    Watching all the little creatures take to flight and flee
    And then lies upon the grass blades but on them is impaled
    Since to him they will never bow he doesnít have the weight
    While above a thousand peopled are banging against the gate
    Saying ďI deserve to be hereĒ though only through soft currents sailed
    They eyes are brimmed with fury and brimmed with impish sounds
    While laying siege to all of Eden to bring it to the ground
    And I watch I donít know if I fear it or if its all okay
    So I walk off feeling heavy and rolling this stone of mine
    Which I made for myself long ago in time
    And now its my companion and I tell it all I say
    As ants are drumming softly and crying out in ire
    That the world that is, is not all that the wanted and desire
    And so for hours you can hear there squeaking as they rave
    And I am so much better at least in my eye
    Which has a cataract so it canít see that I
    Am not so but I know I am older than the waves

    And then looking to the pilliar which is standing over me
    With marble whiteness which is crashing like a sea
    Upon it rests something I can not ever hope to view
    Its like a paragon of halos which wall apart and sigh
    And all the people looking towards like the salesman of the sky
    And I hope that I donít choke upon the true
    Feelings that are bubbling from a cauldron underneath my feet
    While people take a flagon as they hit the street
    Saying ďI will make it I will make the gradeĒ
    And so through the crossbone crossroads they go with out fear
    While some cherubic lyre is play notes so clear
    Which are making all those stony hallways into those of jade
    With flowers ringing round a socket to hide it from eyes
    Which might forget their purpose if it they spy
    So with the future flowing it seems there is no ice
    In that slipstream coming and so we go to find
    All the little presents that are inside our minds
    Which grant us our tomorrows and endeavor to entice
    And so I bear this little phial filled with liquid gold
    All molten like my motherís fluids and before she was old
    And so I will take this precious serum like all that she gave
    And with this I will conquer I will seize all by this sign
    Like that roman of old, the one named Constantine
    So now I come to hit me I am older than waves

    Look there is a prison filled with self made men
    And all there cells have floors made from bogs and fens
    And they are slowly sinking down into the murk
    As the guards they walk down hallways carrying no keys
    For all the doors are unlocked and everyone can see
    Even those who inside there soul forged exiles silently lurk
    And I was silently trudging through a crippled would
    Where everything was begging to all that they could
    And one blindfolded lady could not tell them all
    Where they fall on the scale if they are still pure
    But it wouldnít matter they already know for sure
    They will tell you theyíre damned and waiting for hellís call
    And you can watch they leaves blow but they fall to the ground
    To weighted by there perceived persecution to go floating like a gown
    And I know that they will be buried and no more be seen
    And so old Atlas can no longer hold the world
    Too much it is combined with what stones he thought he hurled
    But in the end it wonít really matter it is all a dream
    And while the congress building becomes a place of trial
    But no one comes up to it they know their worth by miles
    And they know that no punishment of earth can be really save
    And I am on my knees and am crying for the ax
    Of the solemn executioner who has gotten lax
    But I can still say ďI am older than the wavesĒ

    Smiles are floating on the Zephyr on the wind of spring
    Which comes from the suns direction and on the tree branch sings
    Like some bird which it throws about like a childís stone
    And people they are dancing around a bonfire
    To a tune which rocks their organs and paints desire
    Upon rising flames with flutter and moan
    And it all the darkened places a light begins to blow
    Shrouding like a nimbus revealing with its glow
    And I could never ever tell this girl who is standing next to me
    Why we are all happy and why we laugh and play
    We care not for what is happening an eternity a day
    And our insides start to bubble and we explode with glee
    And the rain it is deflected by waves of this pure mirth
    While all the plants are lovely and rising from the earth
    And they join, undulating, the dancing peoples joyful cries
    With neurotic joys and fervor deep within my spine
    Some man is casting roses out into a line
    Which than form a pointing arrow which faces the churches that rise
    Covered up in birthing liquids slick and wet and safe
    Growing plastic card connectors which begin the chafe
    Against all the fly fancies where the people rave
    Distorted I am sing into a microphone
    With words I can not spell and which have grown
    Up from deep with in me because Iím older than the waves

    Oh those tearing claws and talons flying from my hands
    Are made of steel and severed starvings and all that I can
    Do to keep the wind inside me from breaking loose
    as chained cats in a circle are pulling to be free
    to do all that they have typed up in their litanies
    with eager grasping maws that are held by a noose
    made of somebodyís ill perception and nothing but forethought
    but with the rubyís in the pupils it is all for naught
    they are shattering the bondings, all rusted by the sea
    and collapsing race car notions are surging through the brains
    of people who are screaming out loud though not at all insane
    with fire brimming in them eager to be free
    o, yeah gods I can not stop me I must have my will
    and scream out from a faucet in my call so shrill
    with time on either my sides flanking me to night
    with seventeen discard dervish dancers breaking from the heart
    of the rabbit who is blacking everything apart
    and wall-eyed I am watch the foam fade out of sight
    taking its hallucinogenic passion and burying it away
    behind a broken trolley behind the last today
    and no the futures brimming with all that I gave
    and so I tear at all my collars I tear at all my ropes
    so blinded am I by my fury my mind begins to grope
    silently for that notion that I am older than the waves

    and all these things are crashing in me and making me confused
    buffeted by enthusiasm by zealotry abused
    and so I look around me at this damn empty room
    and so with poster hanging solemn and speaking like a muse
    I silently must wonder if they are themselves amused
    With ten talking speakers thumping loudly through out a tomb
    Made of preconceived condenscention and a lonely mind
    But with this rolling tempest breaking I can feel that time
    As broken against the window from which I can see
    The lake is blowing in the wind which is falling from the sky
    With a smashing fire flow that can pass me by
    With all these hurricanes a-coming I watch as a tree
    Goes crashing against one of its brothers and leans there so weak
    And my ears are eyes that see that tell me just what that I seek
    Confusing prosaic piles are leaning about to fall
    They sing in siren silence and tempt me to their charms
    With poetic faces and those philosophic arms
    Which can hold me closely, while somebody bawls
    So please oh please electronic pedestal donít you as well die
    As this tornadoís blowing I can hear you cry
    But from all these twisting tantrums only you can save
    So take all that you are and take it deep within
    While I am slowly typing down all my whims
    With the serpentine knowledge that I am older than the waves
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    it took a while to read but it your poem is really good keep writing you got a gift

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    That is the longest poem I have ever read, in my entire life.

    I think you could almost take each paragraph and make them seperate poems, and it'd still make sense and stuff.
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    Your poem is really well written, I like all of the comparisons you used in it, and your vocabulary is equisite ^.^ great work! Still pretty long though! Lol <3
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    Heheh, I take it the length is a bad thing? *smirks*
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    Lol not really, it's still worth the effort! ^.^
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dorian Grey
    That is the longest poem I have ever read, in my entire life.

    I think you could almost take each paragraph and make them seperate poems, and it'd still make sense and stuff.
    They were designed to be independent of each other. I took a verse for each emotion and then i gave the person feeling them a sort of disembodied slant, as though the feelings are acting upon him as opposed to being a natural extension of his own being. So the ending verse is meant to take all these little bits and tie them together by shows the confusion they cause in the person feeling them.
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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