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    -Words-

    Sticks and stones can break my bones
    But words can hurt me more.
    They're like a vast black ocean of ink
    Casting them on the shore.
    Pressed between pages forever, doomed to gather dust.
    That's not the way great words should live, they should live on in us.
    Poems, stories, pleasure things
    But to all, a deeper meaning.
    The good words, the poems, they come from the heart
    Gorgeous words are truely an art.

    By Black Nymph

    Help make sure gorgeous words aren't a LOST art.
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    Critisism will be accepted, I've always been able to take it before. Please, though, comment. I want to know if it's good or not.
    Thank you.
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    To be completely honest, this is terrible. All you did was take catch phrases and meld them together. That's not art, that's not poetry. It's not anything. You lack the ability to be original. You write about things you don't practice. You talk of deeper meanings but your poem lacked depth and meaning.
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    whatever. I don't want people to lie about it, that's for sure. This was definatly not one of my good poems, provided I have any in the first place.


    Playing with my shadow
    Is more than meets the eye
    My shadow is my keeper
    There by and by.
    Shadows are more dangerous
    Than one might ever think.
    They're everywhere yet nowhere at all
    Playing on the brink.
    People say shadows are harmless
    I beg to contradict.
    Shadows are everywhere and hence know everything
    Including what makes you tick.
    My shadow knows your weaknesses
    Your strengths and habits too.
    Because of what my shadow tells me
    I know everything about you.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Nymph
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    Critisism will be accepted, I've always been able to take it before. Please, though, comment. I want to know if it's good or not.
    Thank you.
    For one who says you can handle it, you sure are incapable.
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    I've critisism before, and everyone will always have a different opinion. If you were stuck with my class for six hours a day, you'd be used to it.


    Playing with my shadow
    Is more than meets the eye
    My shadow is my keeper
    There by and by.
    Shadows are more dangerous
    Than one might ever think.
    They're everywhere yet nowhere at all
    Playing on the brink.
    People say shadows are harmless
    I beg to contradict.
    Shadows are everywhere and hence know everything
    Including what makes you tick.
    My shadow knows your weaknesses
    Your strengths and habits too.
    Because of what my shadow tells me
    I know everything about you.



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