paint me a picture

[~Mithrosent~]

this is a poem i made. plz post

paint a picture of my heart,
becuase you know it so well.
color all the dark corners,
things i cannot tell.

paint a picure of my soul,
and all i hold within.
show your love for what you draw,
and not just what haunts my skin.

paint a picture of my mind,
the part you love best.
brush in strokes, what thought provokes,
and put your skill to the test.

love me for who i am inside,
my heart, my soul, my mind.
keep yhe picture safe in your heart,
to leave our troubles behind.

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hope you all like it

[Heartless Soul Eater]

wow best poem ever, i give it two thumbs up

[Sasuke is God]

I LOVE THAT POEM!! It totally rocks!! I in some miracoulis way...give it five BIG thumbs up!! lol

[MoonPrincess24]

what a really nice poem! ^_^

[Little miss lovley]

thats a really good poem!! i love it! great job ^.^

[Vendetta]

I don't know about you but I like getting tips so here you go. In the first line because is spelt wrong. capitalize the letter in each sentance. Okay, so I really liked your choice in words and how they rhyme.

[~Mithrosent~]

thank you all! ill fix 2mara....2 tired. chech out ma journal if you like what you see. thanks for the tips!!

[Amaruk]

That was good. I like it.

[KRPrincess24]

what a beautiful poem!!!

[Chariza]

Love your poem!!!

[Luck_Sharingan_Sakura]

OMG!
I love it!
You should post some more it's great!!^_^