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    just a poem i wote

    cold, dark
    alone again,
    emptiness
    i know its me
    i want to leave but i cant
    im staying here just for you
    ill suffer for a seckond in your smile
    Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
    nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.

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    Nice poem. Did you do the spelling errors on purpose....?
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    lol good job on noticing yes i did
    Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
    nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.

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    Spelling errors should never be on purpose.
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    Unless of coarse it adds to the character of the poem or poet^-^ like look at how hagrid speaks.

    This poem, though splendidly short lol, reminds me of the nonexistant relationship triangle of Naruto, The demon fox and the fourth... very lonely without one another[because I think they are all alike... in a few ways or another. ^.~ But then again you best not trust my logic or train of thought>.< hehehe.

    The first four lines, in my opinion, is like just naruto before he graduated and also[if you wish to look at it this way] how he is still stripped of blood family or even never gaining the presense of the fourth. As the poem goes on I had a distinct image of the nine-tailed demon fox fighting the fourth hokage! Now as for the spelling mistakes the is the natural side of naruto's being a dunce^-^ And the last line[to me] is either the fox wanting to impress naruto with his power or naruto wanting to surpass the fourth to see his[the fourth's] smile when he[naruto] sees him when he dies....

    I'm sorry for the long comment but smaller pieces of work lets me meditate on them longer.

    Don't be discouraged to write more, can't wait to see more of your work^^
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