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    Two Faces

    One side never dies
    One side stays alive
    One side never gives up
    One side ain't ever say no
    One side relies on people
    One side trustes in humans
    One side still wants it to work out
    One side could care less if you die
    One side would stay but can not
    One side is already gone
    One side died with you
    One side sees it though

    One Faces Problems
    give me good reps please (I did ask nicely)


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    I believe that it is too repeatitive. Despite this, it's a wonderful peice and you're talented.

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    Please do not ask for reps in your posts. There is a thread to beg for reps. I don't appreciate you doing it in fanfiction. If people like you, they will do it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dorian Grey
    Please do not ask for reps in your posts. There is a thread to beg for reps. I don't appreciate you doing it in fanfiction. If people like you, they will do it.
    sorry i was just trying to get out of the huge negative i wont ask any more

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    I like this poem, it is very good, but as Rukia said, It is repeatitive, But i do think it's interesting.

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    Nice job...
    You can be one day an greate poetry...
    Im your fan...
    Nice to met you

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    This is real nice, it is so true to many people, even to myself. Keep at it buddy!



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    I dont completely agree with Rukia... repeatitivness is a common style of poetry. ^.~

    At first I didnt see the two sides clearly but I blame this on the naruto music im listening to... I was singing along to it >.<;; but then I stoped it and reread the poem. And as for reps I think you deserve plenty... but this dangnabbited computer wont let me... *writes down ur name* MUAHAHA!! das right~ takin' names... ill rep you when I go to the library/diff computer... in the mean time write more... ;_; you do have potential... yet you've only posted half a dozen... [am I being selfish again?] lol who knows... POST MORE DANGNABBIT!!! lol
    ~Skyla xoxoxox

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    wow i actually missed this gorgeauos poem? oh god i am losing my touch ^^. i think that its has a semi nice flow but needs to be longer..as to unfold the story within ^^
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    Hrmm..not that bad I guess...
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    Not bad Heartless, not bad at all. It is a bit repetitive but that's not too bad. As it could be a bit longer, it's fine the way it is. Keep writing!

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    I didn't like the way its set up... or the way it flows.. it seems to be missing something to give it a bit of life..
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