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    Last edited by Daenerys; 11-29-2009 at 08:50 PM.
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    That sounds like it could be a verse from a LP song. I like it, I wanted to read more but its too short =(
    Add s'more to it.

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    I hate Linkin Park.

    And yeah, I usually don't really write short poems. I don't think I'm going to add onto this one though. If I think of anything, I'll edit it.
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    Lovely poem... could be a bit longer though...
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    If you think about it though, poems really don't need to be specified lengths ^_^
    It's a very good poem Brody, Hope to see more soon ^_^

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    I added a few more lines that came to me.

    I don't think I could do anything else to the poem to make it better. So it is finished.
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    Yes it is complete now, (I take back the thing about LP)

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    its short but had meaning which makes up for the shortness. i like your poems. i need to see more!
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    It's depressing, but it's pretty neat. Has a nice rhythm to it. Keep it up
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    I think that's a great poem. I really liked it.

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    The last sentence is kinda scary but it goes with the poem ( in a good way.) Over all i liked it.
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